This actually reminds of my own style. The minimalist approach to this suite the character more. No detail seems to be squished in and looks a bit more relaxed. The character is vastly better than your other submission as well. Still a bit stiff but still pretty realistic and anatomical. The TV head, I feel should be a more consistent box shape. Lines on the side of it feel a bit forced as well. Yo could have definitely added depth to the tv, conveying more depth and dimension to it. If that didn't quite made sense, you could always message me and I could show you an example. That however, is a stylistic choice so maybe that's what you wanted. Either way, good job on this! Its a marked improvement.