Dude, this is too awesome!
Solid story and theme.
Fully explored musical ideas.
And under 4 hours?
This is nuts lol. Really awesome job!
Dude, this is too awesome!
Solid story and theme.
Fully explored musical ideas.
And under 4 hours?
This is nuts lol. Really awesome job!
oh, haha i was super joking about that in the forum lol—been working on this for a week :P
but thank you so much for the kind words!!! hope you don't change your score because i lied hehehe
Now I actually want to visit rhode island lol.
You intro gave me flash backs to ASMR funky kong for a minute.
Awesome job dude!
I loved the feel but really want an instrumental version of this. The composition was drawing me in but the vocals just messed the vibe for me. Keep creating though!
Instrumentation doesn't right to me. The feel disingenuous and very plane. Composition wise, there is almost no development of this idea at all. Even small ideas can be expanded and developed into something far greater. This did none of that. Keep creating! I'm sure you've got plenty of musical growth in you!
darn
I like the feel of this but it need a bit more development, I don't like the off beat sound of the instrument for the main theme. This ultimately feels flat and plain to me. You need to make me feel something! Keep creating! Would love to see how you'll improve this sound.
Like the musical idea but I feel like instrumentation and effects need some revision and fine tuning to make the theme feel more cohesive but clean. All the instruments seem to mash together. The instruments bleed into one another's parts, making the composition less defined and more muddled. Far from a bad piece, just needs revision. Keep creating!
This song is so tight. Its has the castlevania feel with the synths but that base is so out of control and funky. I can't stop bobbing my head. I honestly just want a game with this and all you do is tare through hordes of enemies. The switch at the end as well is so good, Love it. The only gripe I have with it is instrumentation. I don't feel like all the instruments blend incredibly will with each other, the bass had much detail in comparison with the flat synths, making them feel really detached. I ,however, can deal with it because the composition is too rad. Love it man!
This had some god ideas, melodies and development. However, I don't feel like the development is taken far enough. The strings were nice but you could have made a greater impact with them in the middle or some other time instead of having the new sound come in at the end. It makes feel lopsided, lol. They would've been so good for development. Either way, this is still some good work. Keep creating!
Yea, the strings... At the beginning I forced myself to make this a pure piano creation... In the end I became weak x) ... I know it's quite unconventional (not to say, stupid, hehe), only for this reason I allowed them to be. Thanks, I will. And thanks for your review.
I really enjoy this! This sets a really nice tone/mood and continues to alter the feel of it from the entrance of the snare and strings to the vocals at the end. The one thing I think you could have done is add more to the song and develop it more! Aside from that though, this is really really great. It makes me call back to the atmospheric sound track of skyrim so bravo to you!
Oh thanks. I'll keep that in my mind, when I should ever try to make something like that again.
The vocals are nice but the song feels like its divided in two, with the vocalist doing her thing while the backtrack does not feel connected to it. Everything in the songs feels disconnected. The back track should become the glue of every component of the song, not just a separate element. That's just my idea. Not saying this song is complete trash, just saying it needs improvement, which I think you can totally do! Can't wait to hear what you make next on your quest through music!
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University of Central Florida
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