I really Like this alot! I don't know what's intentional and what's not but this feels beautiful for its simplicity naturalness of it. The song feels like it embraces the little imperfection of the sounds quality and really sounds well. Kinda of reminds me of mumblecore films that accept simple realness of simple everyday life and bring life to it. Only thing I would have to say is what wingowinston said about bring out the words or articulate the word better so the lyrics can be heard. Other than that, stellar job!